Lord of the FliesChapter 1 -
The Sound of the Shell
"The Beginning?"
Perspective: Ralph
Dear Journal, Today was a pretty good day. I first landed on this island and met some new people. But some of them weren’t so friendly. The person that I first met was this kid named Piggy. I don’t really now his real name. He is big boned and he wears glasses. He also has something called ass-mar. Then there was this kid name Jack. He tried to use is effulgence to get everybody to vote for him to be the leader of the group. But it didn’t work, I still won. I think he tried to use his glamour also. But I think he has a little enormity in him. I don’t know why he didn’t even kill the pig. I think he was a bit scared but we will see next time. He is kind of a jerk because he told Piggy to shut up then called him fat. Then there was Simon. I think he is kind of weird kid. He faints a bit much. We decided that all of us except Piggy to go find out where we were. I should of gave a proffer so that Piggy can come along because he is apart of the group and he was with me from the beginning. As we were going through the jungle, I should of thought to leave traces behind just incase we got lost. While we were walking there, I saw great fronds everywhere. We came I am glad that they chose me to be leader because I can give them the brilliance I have. And I can show them the great survival skills I have. Also use my strength to get through the obstacles.
The Sound of the Shell
"The Beginning?"
Perspective: Ralph
Dear Journal, Today was a pretty good day. I first landed on this island and met some new people. But some of them weren’t so friendly. The person that I first met was this kid named Piggy. I don’t really now his real name. He is big boned and he wears glasses. He also has something called ass-mar. Then there was this kid name Jack. He tried to use is effulgence to get everybody to vote for him to be the leader of the group. But it didn’t work, I still won. I think he tried to use his glamour also. But I think he has a little enormity in him. I don’t know why he didn’t even kill the pig. I think he was a bit scared but we will see next time. He is kind of a jerk because he told Piggy to shut up then called him fat. Then there was Simon. I think he is kind of weird kid. He faints a bit much. We decided that all of us except Piggy to go find out where we were. I should of gave a proffer so that Piggy can come along because he is apart of the group and he was with me from the beginning. As we were going through the jungle, I should of thought to leave traces behind just incase we got lost. While we were walking there, I saw great fronds everywhere. We came I am glad that they chose me to be leader because I can give them the brilliance I have. And I can show them the great survival skills I have. Also use my strength to get through the obstacles.
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BLOG GRADE
ACCURACY – 4
GRAMMAR – 5
5 VOCAB. WORDS – 5
ON TIME – 5
TOTAL POINTS = 19
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